the Frog Pond

Looks like Gus has saved Newt and Spike from a daring crashlanding on an alien world.

Some of you may recall how I knew I wanted to improve on the Frog Pond. I asked webcomic reviewer El Santo to look it over and let me know the three biggest things to fix first. He did so very quickly and kindly, all of his insights being invaluable to me. Some things I had planned on fixing already but some were a surprise.

Some things require me to improve specific skills, some I will work in during storylines and some just require me to remember to do them. For example, as I colored this story, I kept kicking myself because of the extra linework that I created for myself. Duh.

Anyway, onward and upward.

I can hear Jay now complaining about how long it takes to get one of those ships ready for flight as it is, let alone after crashing into a foriegn planet in the backwoods of the galactic rim.

And now headquarters is calling?!? How can Jay know where they are already?